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He spent more time on it than he really should have. But it had been so long since he’d indulged in a project like this.
Gather ye rosebuds while ye may,

Each element blended seamlessly into the next, leading the audience, all unknowing, to the great reveal.
Old Time is still a-flying:

He considered each detail carefully. This first masterpiece would set the tone for all the rest.
And this same flower that smiles to-day

One last look and he had to go. His art would have to succeed or fail on its own merits now.
To-morrow will be dying.

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Now, the question is: did I make it clear enough?

Date: 2011-02-09 08:53 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] jerusha
Hmm...this reminds me of Jenny Calendar's murder.

Date: 2011-02-09 09:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] garnigal.livejournal.com
Phew! I wasn't sure if it was going to be clear enough, since I didn't put in any identifying information.

Date: 2011-02-09 09:17 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] jerusha
Yay! I think the poem in the middle, and the references to the artwork make it clear enough. I really liked it, in case that wasn't clear.

Date: 2011-02-09 09:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] garnigal.livejournal.com
I'm glad. I've been taking a creative writing class, and I'm afraid it's made me even more esoteric and subtle.

Date: 2011-02-09 10:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] a2zmom.livejournal.com
I assumed it was Angel artfully arranging Jenny and I see that I'm right. I like the interior monolog very much.

Date: 2011-02-09 10:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] garnigal.livejournal.com
Thank you for reading and commenting. I was going to do something with Giles, but Angelus just screamed for attention. :)

Date: 2011-02-09 11:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] texanfan.livejournal.com
Angelus' little present for Giles? Which is really creepy and gah! inducing. which I think is what you were going for. :)

Date: 2011-02-10 04:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] garnigal.livejournal.com
I do rather enjoy inducing gah! I might have made a good vampire, in a different unlife.

Date: 2011-02-11 05:42 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ares132006.livejournal.com
gah! I didn't get it, but it was so obvious when pointed out to me.

Fantastic.

Date: 2011-02-14 03:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] garnigal.livejournal.com
Thanks Ares!

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